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yocrowe14

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PostSubject: untitled poem   untitled poem Icon_minitimeSat Oct 11, 2008 8:25 pm

Why did he stop loving me?
How could he forget so fast?
Does he still feel love for me?
How could such sweet love not last?

I've learned I can't believe my eyes,
Nor trust the instincts of my heart.
I look upon a sea of lies,
Too wide to cross, too deep to chart.

And yet I am condemned to sail,
Upon that sea awash in pain.
Love hides its truth behind a veil,
That none may know they live in vain.


(i wrote that after edward broke up with bella in new moon)

(p.s. im in alice house)
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alice-in-wonderlandness

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PostSubject: Re: untitled poem   untitled poem Icon_minitimeSat Oct 11, 2008 10:42 pm

You are Fantastic! I can't wait for more of your wonderful fantastic poetry.
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PostSubject: Re: untitled poem   untitled poem Icon_minitimeThu Oct 16, 2008 5:41 pm

Its amazing Whit! Very Happy And I thought it sounded like New Moon Wink
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PostSubject: Re: untitled poem   untitled poem Icon_minitimeTue Oct 28, 2008 11:21 am

thanks you guys
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PostSubject: Re: untitled poem   untitled poem Icon_minitimeTue Oct 28, 2008 3:06 pm

You know how much I love this stuff whit!!!! It deserves a fajillion blue ribbons.
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