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PostSubject: Breath (poem)   Sat Oct 11, 2008 8:26 pm

He took my breath away,
As I saw his face.
Seems like he came from Heaven,
And took a mortal's place.

He slowly started walking,
And came closer to me.
My feet would not move,
And I could not breathe.

My heart skipped a beat,
And my knees felt weak.
There was no air in my lungs,
No more words to speak.

He slowly touched my cheek,
And my mind went spinning around.
He looked into my eyes,
And I was floating off the ground.

When I touched his soft hair,
My fingertips felt numb.
I looked into his eyes,
And I knew my prince had come.

I knew that I was happy,
For I felt no need to cry.
And I knew I was reborn,
For it felt like I had died.

I knew I was in Heaven,
For his love was meant to stay.
And when he softly kissed my lips,
He took my breath away.
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PostSubject: Re: Breath (poem)   Sat Oct 11, 2008 10:41 pm

WOW that is all can say amazing!!
the imagery was beautiful and the poem was lyrical and very well constructed!
Love it.
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