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PostSubject: Original Poems.   Wed Oct 01, 2008 7:28 pm

These are poems about love pain and hardship. Most go out to my friends who get themselves hurt because they put themselves out there!
#18
(heartbreak for Kayya)
My hair is damp.
My clothes are soaked.
But the tears are from inside.
It's too much to bare.
I sit in the rain.
I don't know how long I have.
You didn't want me any more.
But I always will want you.
I shiver as the rain falls harder.
Someone passes.
Another face that appears empty.
I only wish that time would heal me.
#7
(Chrystal's Fav)
My heartbeats faster as you approach.
You take another step.
My breathing becomes uneven.
A closer step.
My lips pulse to reach out to yours.
One step left.
My hand waits for your embrace.
"I'm sorry. We can't," you whisper.
I drop my eyes from your face.
"I...I still...love you," you stutter.
I fall.
You leave.
My lips turn blue.
"I love you," i mutter.
My heartbeat stops.
Everything's black.
#10
(Megan liking the 'rotten' kid in our class.)
Everyone asks why I like you.
I shrug.
"I just do."
Everyone says he's just an annoyance.
I tilt my head thoughtfully.
"Is he?"
Everyone says I shouldn't love you.
I close my eyes.
"But I do."
Everyone said he was evil.
I licked my lips.
"Being good's no fun."
Everyone says he would leave me.
I blinked back tears.
"He already has."
#11 and 13
(my favorites)
My days go by slowly.
My vision blurs.
I remember the feeling.
I remember the words.
I tug on my binding clothes.
They trap me in.
I remember the hurt.
I remember the cold.
I shiver as you come up to me.
"What's wrong?"
"The past is wrong."
"We're in the present," you object.
"The present freezes the pain I'm in."
You frown, "Have you no hope for the future?"
"The future is pointless if I'm not with you.

#13's at school.

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:31 am

COOL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LUV THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:42 am

thanks

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:12 am

Noooo problem

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:18 am

lol i hope my thanks doesnt get in trouble

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:54 am

Why would it? Oh.. Spam...

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 2:26 am

Yeap. hmm. Wow. Poems. Wow. *on subject*

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 3:49 am

i didnt read them all. THAT IS SPAM ALICE!
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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:19 am

NO ITS NOT!! and you dont got to read them at all

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 11:06 am

Maty you're getting on my nerves now! You stop acting like a two years old or you'll be in trouble!



Laura please update you're post and try to think about it next time.

And I love your text! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 2:15 pm

OK?? ummm. what text?

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 5:26 pm

Your poem... lol

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 5:50 pm

I really like them. They flow nicely and I like how you kept the same theam all the way through

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Thu Oct 02, 2008 11:56 pm

lol it was for my friends. they go through a lot of pain.. and i can get in touch with mine. THANKS!

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PostSubject: Re: Original Poems.   Wed Oct 08, 2008 3:09 am

I love them Liss...*insert deep thoughts here*

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